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	<title>Comments on: Would You Like Editing With That?</title>
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		<title>By: On editing &#171; Thuy Linh Nguyen</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-533</link>
		<dc:creator>On editing &#171; Thuy Linh Nguyen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Sep 2009 00:48:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Slatter has posted a useful editing kit for writers, &#8216;Would You Like Editing With That?&#8217;, on her [...]</description>
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		<title>By: angelaslatter</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-490</link>
		<dc:creator>angelaslatter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 23:33:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Awww, editing-bot, see what ya did? Ya angered the VanderMeer! You&#039;re going back into the nuts and bolts pile.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awww, editing-bot, see what ya did? Ya angered the VanderMeer! You&#8217;re going back into the nuts and bolts pile.</p>
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		<title>By: JeffVanderMeer</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-489</link>
		<dc:creator>JeffVanderMeer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 20:40:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I DO NOT BELIEVE ROBOTS SHOULD EDIT OUR WORK. No robot editing. No, sir, no ma&#039;am. Writing ain&#039;t no science, capybara. It&#039;s the writer&#039;s job, or the writer&#039;s editor, to analyze the repetition. And do it the old-fashioned way: by reading through the text. If a repetition doesn&#039;t bother you, then it&#039;s not a problem. If a repetition does bother you, then there will be collatoral damage in considering it anyway, and the number of things you&#039;ll find while doing a non-automated pass-through for repetition is important. ROBOTS SHOULD NOT EDIT YOUR WORK BECAUSE IT&#039;S SUPPOSED TO BE TIME-INTENSIVE AND DIFFICULT, MOLLY. OR FRED.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I DO NOT BELIEVE ROBOTS SHOULD EDIT OUR WORK. No robot editing. No, sir, no ma&#8217;am. Writing ain&#8217;t no science, capybara. It&#8217;s the writer&#8217;s job, or the writer&#8217;s editor, to analyze the repetition. And do it the old-fashioned way: by reading through the text. If a repetition doesn&#8217;t bother you, then it&#8217;s not a problem. If a repetition does bother you, then there will be collatoral damage in considering it anyway, and the number of things you&#8217;ll find while doing a non-automated pass-through for repetition is important. ROBOTS SHOULD NOT EDIT YOUR WORK BECAUSE IT&#8217;S SUPPOSED TO BE TIME-INTENSIVE AND DIFFICULT, MOLLY. OR FRED.</p>
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		<title>By: Angela Slatter</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-486</link>
		<dc:creator>Angela Slatter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 07:36:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, now Wordle I had not thought of! Xlnt, Smithers.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, now Wordle I had not thought of! Xlnt, Smithers.</p>
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		<title>By: Irk</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-485</link>
		<dc:creator>Irk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 07:02:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m keenly aware that I use crutch words.  I use Wordle to help see just how many times I used a word in a particular work:

http://www.wordle.net/

After running that, I tend to pair down words such as &quot;see&quot; &quot;like&quot; and &quot;somewhat&quot;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m keenly aware that I use crutch words.  I use Wordle to help see just how many times I used a word in a particular work:</p>
<p><a href="http://www.wordle.net/" rel="nofollow">http://www.wordle.net/</a></p>
<p>After running that, I tend to pair down words such as &#8220;see&#8221; &#8220;like&#8221; and &#8220;somewhat&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>By: Angela Slatter</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-484</link>
		<dc:creator>Angela Slatter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 05:28:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>:-) :-)</description>
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		<title>By: Angela Slatter</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-483</link>
		<dc:creator>Angela Slatter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 05:27:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mmmm, some kind of automated editing machine, you say? *scratches chin suspiciously*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mmmm, some kind of automated editing machine, you say? *scratches chin suspiciously*</p>
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		<title>By: Angela Slatter</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-482</link>
		<dc:creator>Angela Slatter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 05:21:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cheers, Pamela - it&#039;s a comfort to know it happens to you too! :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cheers, Pamela &#8211; it&#8217;s a comfort to know it happens to you too! <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Angela Slatter</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-481</link>
		<dc:creator>Angela Slatter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 05:20:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Part of it is working which one of the repetitions to replace and which ones to leave - which one ensures the best rhythm for your sentence? It&#039;s a thinking editing I&#039;m advocating, not just a knee-jerk slash and burn - coz that&#039;s bad too! :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Part of it is working which one of the repetitions to replace and which ones to leave &#8211; which one ensures the best rhythm for your sentence? It&#8217;s a thinking editing I&#8217;m advocating, not just a knee-jerk slash and burn &#8211; coz that&#8217;s bad too! <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Jay Tee</title>
		<link>http://angelaslatter.com/2009/09/03/would-you-like-editing-with-that/#comment-480</link>
		<dc:creator>Jay Tee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 23:43:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A handy helper for editing is the AutoCrit Editing Wizard.  It helps with the &#039;de-that-erising&#039; and with finding overused and repeated words.

The AutoCrit Wizard really helps me improve my manuscript -- and makes the editing process go faster, too!

I&#039;m a big fan :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A handy helper for editing is the AutoCrit Editing Wizard.  It helps with the &#8216;de-that-erising&#8217; and with finding overused and repeated words.</p>
<p>The AutoCrit Wizard really helps me improve my manuscript &#8212; and makes the editing process go faster, too!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m a big fan <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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